Athie's Poetry

[Athie]

Here is my poetry. I know it sucks but whatever xD.


Freedom

My hands hit the soft, moist, dirt,

as my feet slide into place.

I wanted no other worries,

this is what I wanted to face.



I hear my heart beat solemnly,

while I wait to hear that sound.

I look up towards my path,

but my foes look at the ground.



I tremble slightly,

I can barely await.

To see my foes disappear,

to see them one-by-one, slowly abate.



The gunshot fires,

and I take off.

I don't look behind me,

and I silently scoff.












This is me, in my opinion of when I hang out with a certain guy, (Icefire, you will NEVER, EVER guess who it is. You seriousy have NO idea. :D)

With You :D

When I’m with you,
Weird things occur,
My heart starts to flutter,
My eyesight’s a blur.

My brain just dies,
And I start to panic,
My feet fail me,
And I’m in a state of manic.

You don’t even know
Why I trip in the hall
Or stupidly walk
Into a brick wall

It’s just ‘cause of you,
I hate you for that
I can’t even talk
Or just simply chat.

[NiaZen]

uh, there's none.....-_-'

[Athie]

I know. Sorry xD

[rivenmist]

I thought there would be poetry...*looks around*

[Athie]

I'm working on that. ^_^"

[Kyuu]

there is so poetry! it's the first post!!

[verscilith]

Athie probalby edited it in later. ^-^

Very nice. I'm not alltogether too sure what's happening, but I'm tired and I'll probalby figure it out in ten minutes. xD

Still, I like the way it flows. It reminds me of this song I'm currently obsessive lsitening to. XD

[Athie]

It's me running track. Thanks Ver ^_^

[Athie]

This is me, in my opinion of when I hang out with a certain guy, (Icefire, you will NEVER, EVER guess who it is. You seriousy have NO idea. )

With You

When I’m with you,
Weird things occur,
My heart starts to flutter,
My eyesight’s a blur.

My brain just dies,
And I start to panic,
My feet fail me,
And I’m in a state of manic.

You don’t even know
Why I trip in the hall
Or stupidly walk
Into a brick wall

It’s just ‘cause of you,
I hate you for that
I can’t even talk
Or just simply chat.

[Kyo Fox]

OMG *gasp* I love it! and I dont even like poetry!

[Athie]

Wow! Thanks! =D

[GIR]

In a state of manic? That doesn't seem to make sense

[verscilith]

Ohhhh~ I can so understand that much better now. XD

Hm~ The second one's kinda funny. "You don't even know, why I trip in the hall, Or stupidly walk, Into a brick wall" I laughed for a bit there. The walking itno a brick wall part is just funny to me. I haven't done that....... yet. >.>

[Kyuu]

manic: affected by or pertaining to mania
mania: excessive excitement or enthusiasm
^^ i is smartisticated because for my learnings

[rivenmist]

Oh rly?
...Hey ! Poems!! *eats*
Yum! Tasty!