Athie
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Sie wissen nicht, Sie? I.. ich liebe Dich.
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Post by Athie on Jun 18, 2008 14:35:52 GMT -8
Don't eat my poems! I worked hard!  |
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Athie
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Sie wissen nicht, Sie? I.. ich liebe Dich.
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Post by Athie on Jun 18, 2008 14:37:54 GMT -8
This one's for my friend who's moving away. :[
I used the brick wall thing again. :D
Running into brick walls,
Falling helplessly down the halls.
Yeah we’re dorks and we’re proud,
Don’t be hatin’ just because we’re loud.
Tripping over dust and air,
Talking to things that aren’t really there.
The stuff you say behind our back,
Doesn’t really matter because it’s whack.
Forgetting what we’re saying while we’re talking,
Not remembering where we’re even walking.
That makes us cool, because we don’t care,
What you say about our clothes or our hair.
You know you wanna be in our group,
Where we play freeze tag and hula hoop.
We know the only reason that you talk shit,
Is because down-deep you know that we’re legit.
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Post by NiaZen on Jun 18, 2008 14:42:32 GMT -8
ME LIKEY IT! ai really does. ^w^ (i love my sucky grammer)
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Kyuu
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Post by Kyuu on Jun 18, 2008 18:56:44 GMT -8
I LOVE THAT!!!! it's really cool! (for grammar bad yay!!! )
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GIR
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Post by GIR on Jun 19, 2008 5:32:54 GMT -8
I love it! May I have permission to print it out sometime to put on my stuff? XD It so works!
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Post by rivenmist on Jun 19, 2008 10:58:43 GMT -8
That's awesome!
I love it! *100 out of 10*
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Icefire
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Post by Icefire on Jun 22, 2008 8:22:28 GMT -8
Athie you really should put some of that poetry in the AR Ammons contest. You could win first! If I won second last year for that poem I wrote in about 1 minute (not exagerating) then you could definatly win first. (And I dont know how much first prize is, but second is $35)
EDIT: NOOO! Athie please tell me who it is... YOU NEVER GAVE ME ANY HINTS EITHER! AND I TOLD YOU! Grr....
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Athie
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Sie wissen nicht, Sie? I.. ich liebe Dich.
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Post by Athie on Jun 30, 2008 19:28:01 GMT -8
Thank ye. And All of youy have permission to use it :]
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Athie
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Sie wissen nicht, Sie? I.. ich liebe Dich.
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Post by Athie on Jul 31, 2008 20:16:43 GMT -8
This poem sucks. XD But I wrote it when I was mad. It has no title.
You don't hear me when I talk.
Am I a ghost?
You don't see me standing there.
Am I invisible?
I'm not one of you.
No matter what you want.
I can't be, I won't be
one of you.
I'm not your first choice
I'm what you settle for
I'm not plastic like you
I'm not fake.
My smile does not hide a stone heart.
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Kyuu
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Post by Kyuu on Aug 1, 2008 7:50:41 GMT -8
No it doesn't! that's a really good one!!!
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Icefire
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Post by Icefire on Aug 4, 2008 7:27:22 GMT -8
Haha... I have a stone heart... Or actually, more like Ice. Thanks to stupid... idiotic... retarded...*continues on in a manner of nasty words*... boys... (No offense to any on this site.) Except *Insert names one, two, and three*. But that is a great poem. Haha, on a personality test I got 90 percent smart, 10 percent sensitive, and 0 percent romantic... haha.... yep, thats me. Although I'm not so sure about the smartness. That should be slowness.
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Athie
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Post by Athie on Aug 4, 2008 16:54:34 GMT -8
Woah. That quiz was whack. o.o
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Athie
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Post by Athie on Aug 10, 2008 18:46:49 GMT -8
My new poem. u.u
"Woes Of A Darling Girl"
No one knows how much she cries,
how much she yells,
how much she lies.
Broken hearts and shattered dreams,
pouring tears,
silent screams.
Hope is gone and trust has fled,
heart ripped out,
left for dead.
A stab to her lonesome soul,
left with shards,
never whole.
She finally just quit trying,
always screaming,
always crying.
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Post by rivenmist on Aug 27, 2008 18:26:24 GMT -8
T^T
It's sad, and it sounds like a story I'm trying to write. XD
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Athie
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Post by Athie on Sept 1, 2008 19:55:57 GMT -8
Good luck with your story Rivvie. I'm actually turning this poem into a song.
Yes, yes, it will be a screamo song. This song wouldn't sound to good as a country song. |
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