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Post by Phanomel on Jan 18, 2008 20:10:58 GMT -8
What if one lone voice called out to you from the darkness?
What if one extra shadow followed you, hoping to be noticed?
What if a lonely one walked up to you from the black?
Would you ignore one's voice?
Would you cast one asside?
Would you leave one to return to one's darkness?
What if you could see through a wall, to what lies below the surface?
What if you could lift one up in to the light?
What if you allowed one to stay by you, to bask in the freedom from loneliness?
Would you see anything?
Would you find strength you never had before?
Would you forget your solitude?
What if one confessed everything to you?
What if one finally decided it wasn't okay?
What if one changed to make smaller the large abyss?
Would you listen?
Would you realise what you're doing?
Would you accept a sacrifice?
If you had a choice, would you stop his hand?
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Post by NiaZen on Jan 18, 2008 20:22:39 GMT -8
I love it, and my answer would be, (to the first questions (would you questions) no, no, no, then, yes, yes, yes, then, yes, yes, yes, and yes.
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Post by Phanomel on Jan 18, 2008 20:23:44 GMT -8
Bet you can't guess who that is that's speaking here. GOTTA GO!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by NiaZen on Jan 18, 2008 20:25:39 GMT -8
BYEYA! is it you?! is it?! is it?!
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Post by Aura on Jan 18, 2008 20:28:31 GMT -8
It sounds like it's directed towards Howl, though I could be wrong. As for who says it... if it is for him, then it could be his subconscious, his conscious, the shadows, or someone else. ^^;
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Post by NiaZen on Jan 18, 2008 20:39:05 GMT -8
oooooooh, let's just wait 'till Phan tells us...^-^
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Post by Phanomel on Jan 23, 2008 18:07:37 GMT -8
Actually, I've forgotten who it was originally speaking of, but now I have a new one anyways. ^_^
It's actually the story of two vampires. It's actually about Orpheria.
He wakes up in an alley way. No one will talk to him. No one will even seem to care. He's stranded of the streets of a city for days without any money, thus no way of finding a place to stay, no way of finding food, and quite frankly no way of getting anyone to notice him. We all know how money makes you important.
So, this strange man just appears and starts stalking him one day. Eventually, he is approached and they sort of work out a deal.
Anyways, so we end up with a master and a sort of slave. At first, things really do seem to be going nicely for Orpheria.
But the beginning was years ago. He ends up a complete mess. Nothing of his old self is left, and he is severely punished for nearly every mistake. He loses his independance, and grows so use to obeying his masters every word, that when he finally comes in close contact with a stranger, and actually has a chance to speak with another, he finds himself obeying the stranger.
That's all I have for now. Feel free to guess at who the stranger is if you wish. ^_^ I may or may not tell. Might give away too much.
*is too distracted to finish the post*
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Post by verscilith on Jan 24, 2008 4:06:48 GMT -8
Ohhhh...
I was going to say Vuka to Howl..
But yout story seems more interesting. ^^
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Post by NiaZen on Feb 12, 2008 17:03:49 GMT -8
Oh, okay, I get it now!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^-^ and that's a cool name....and hard to write....
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Post by Phanomel on Feb 16, 2008 15:03:14 GMT -8
Orpheria? Well, maybe it's not that hard for me because I'm saying it all the time. Benevolen sounded too much like adrenaline, so I changed it to Beneivolen, or however you spell it. And Lasieniker..... He needs to just die already. But Howl will take care of him! *evil laugh*
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Post by NiaZen on Feb 16, 2008 17:04:48 GMT -8
you give your peeps really hard names...OxO...wow...
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Post by Phanomel on Feb 16, 2008 17:10:34 GMT -8
Those are some of the easier ones. I can barely pronounce Stfaii and Kdymeth's right. But then again, that's just because their species says stuff really weird.
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Post by NiaZen on Feb 23, 2008 16:50:41 GMT -8
@x@ wow phan....wow....but those are still really cool names....
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Post by Phanomel on Mar 8, 2008 15:24:15 GMT -8
Now I have my peoples like Muoua, Soibhb, Oehou... Or however it's spelled. I need to look at that again.
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Post by NiaZen on Mar 10, 2008 15:29:31 GMT -8
AAH! you have really complicated names...my most complicated is Qouiesz...  |
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