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Post by Kyuu on Sept 4, 2008 19:57:53 GMT -8
Well, a lot of the time, I come up with just, little blurbs of something, so I'll just put 'em here... This isjust a little haiku type thing I came up with when my dad had chewed me out for having a high B instead of an A... When I was already feeling horrible for finally telling him that I wasn't sure I could keep up with IB... Doing all I can, Trying hard to make you proud. Seems I never can.
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Post by NiaZen on Sept 5, 2008 16:50:26 GMT -8
Aww, I really like this one! >w< AND YES YOU CAN KYUU! IF I CAN DO THIS! SO CAN YOU!
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Post by Kyuu on Sept 5, 2008 16:56:25 GMT -8
yeah, i know, i was just feeling really bad last night cuz i was really stressing on the personal project cuz dad and grandma would stop bugging me about it and... Edit: and this little chimchar icon is what inspired/ gave me the idea for this little haiku.
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Post by NiaZen on Sept 5, 2008 17:34:55 GMT -8
oh...Ok then, but just don't stress out too much Kyuu
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Post by ashiko on Sept 5, 2008 17:51:52 GMT -8
Yeah! don't stress out! You can do it! I know that my parents expect a lot of me. They always tell me that I can do better if I get a B.
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Post by Kyuu on Sept 5, 2008 19:41:20 GMT -8
Okay, this is a fanfiction I came up with one night when I couldn't get to sleep. It's a ShinoKiba one with character death, but I kinda like it... -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- -Kiba's P.O.V.- "I-I love you," I said, the words tumbling out of my mouth, a blush creeping up my face. 'There! I did it! I finally told him!' I thought, having finally told Shino about my feelings for him. For a time, he was silent. Finally, he spoke, "I love you, too," my heart soared, he returned my feelings! But nothing could have prepared me for what happened next. He kept speaking, "But as a friend and comrade, I'm sorry." All the blood drained from my face, my heart, which was soaring only moments before, fell, and shattered. I walked away, realizing how stupid I had been, thinking for a minute that Shino, silent, emotionless, beautiful Shino would ever return my feelings, me being my loud-mouthed, emotional self. I decided that fate didn't want us together and tried to forget it, throwing myself into my missions with renewed gusto. -End Kiba's P.O.V.- Two weeks later, Kiba was sent on a solo mission and didn't come back. -Shino's P.O.V.- I stand beside the memorial to those killed in action. A new name has recently been added and I can see it clearly; it reads Inuzuka Kiba. Despite the Aburame reputation of showing no emotion, I dissolve into tears, sobs wracking my body as I realize that I loved Kiba as more than a friend and comrade. And now he would never know, but I say it anyway, hoping that his spirit is listening, "I love you, too, Kiba." I then realized that it was raining, the dark sky reflecting my feelings. I got up and slowly walked home, the rain masking my still falling tears. ‘This must be what they mean by not knowing what you have until it’s gone,’ I thought. -End Shino's P.O.V.- ~owari~
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Post by NiaZen on Sept 7, 2008 5:41:54 GMT -8
yuus, I read it...maybe you can make it longer, on how Kiba died? o.O
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Post by Kyuu on Sept 7, 2008 11:15:14 GMT -8
nuuuu! i meant it to be that length!!!!!!!!!
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Post by ashiko on Sept 7, 2008 11:36:11 GMT -8
I like it. I like how it leaves the mystery of how he dies. Except...KIBA DIES!!! TT-TT *starts crying hysterically*
Ever notice that in a lot of fanfictions, the character dies. That's a lot of deaths for the characters. Good thing all the fanfictions aren't real... (strange musing)
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Post by Kyuu on Sept 7, 2008 13:23:46 GMT -8
i'm sorry!!! but it just came to me and i had to write it down!!!
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Post by NiaZen on Sept 9, 2008 17:53:59 GMT -8
oh, Ok then Kyuu, maybe make another and make it like that? (how he dies)
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Post by Kyuu on Sept 9, 2008 17:54:58 GMT -8
fine... I'll make another one... I'll probably have it done before the weekend... maybe...
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Post by NiaZen on Sept 12, 2008 20:11:11 GMT -8
Hopefully ^w^ because it's really intersting
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Post by Kyuu on Sept 13, 2008 20:25:07 GMT -8
I am wotking (starting to) on it right now!!!!!! it might be on before the weekend is out!!! *happydance*
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Post by ashiko on Sept 14, 2008 11:59:42 GMT -8
Cool! I can't wait! *sits and watches eagerly for the story* oh wait, is it one where Kiba dies?
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