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Post by NiaZen on Jan 2, 2008 20:25:53 GMT -8
Well, here are just some random poems I made. BE AWARE! THEY DO NOT RHYME! Alone
why can't you be with me?
Why can't I see you?
I need you
I want you.
You need to be with me
Without you I feel alone,
no one understands me
I need you
To share
My love
to live
My life.
Please come
Please.
Or I'll die,
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Post by rivenmist on Jan 3, 2008 11:32:27 GMT -8
*blink* You're trying to be depressing, aren't you?
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Post by Phanomel on Jan 3, 2008 17:45:26 GMT -8
Hmm. Lonelyness seems to be a popular subject in poetry.
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Post by NiaZen on Jan 3, 2008 18:52:31 GMT -8
nope...I'm already depressed, it's a failed attempt at remembering a poem I wrote...
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Post by Aura on Jan 3, 2008 21:05:18 GMT -8
I think it's just easy to write about being lonely or sad. I don't know, a lot of my poems come out like that. When I write, I become more sorrowful for some reason. Or at least, more solemn. Don't really know why.
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Post by NiaZen on Jan 4, 2008 12:29:06 GMT -8
I'm gonna write the real one soon....it's about Mr. I-do-not-exist..and how he doesn't exist and how much I need him...it's not depression, it's lonleyness, and my need for some love...
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Post by verscilith on Jan 5, 2008 0:52:58 GMT -8
Mnnnn~ I understand you, Nia. On the grounds of needing someone there.
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Post by NiaZen on Jan 5, 2008 19:19:14 GMT -8
yeah, when brothers like to always make fun of you and your friends...it really sucks....(even my mom does that sometimes TT_TT)
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Post by Phanomel on Jan 18, 2008 16:55:21 GMT -8
Brothers. That's natural rivalry. Happens to the best of us.
But others, there's just no reason for leaving you in the dark. No matter what they say, they never really seem to care unless it directly involves them. They make you suffer even more so they can be happy. They use you, because they know you'll do things for them. Yet, somehow you still love them. *sigh*
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Post by NiaZen on Jan 18, 2008 20:26:39 GMT -8
*cries* and then...there's my "best true" friend...I feel our conection getting weaker...
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Post by rivenmist on Jan 22, 2008 4:19:33 GMT -8
HA! So muck for...much for the bonds of love being strong... d*** lairs...
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Post by NiaZen on Feb 5, 2008 12:55:59 GMT -8
here's a poem I made up in orchestra today!
Hello,
I have a yellow cello
Made of jello
That when you eat it.
It makes you mellow!
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GIR
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Post by GIR on Feb 6, 2008 11:50:08 GMT -8
lol. An ello poem. Continuation!
Hello.
I noticed your cello
I am just a fellow
who wants to purchase that jello
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Post by NiaZen on Feb 6, 2008 14:23:09 GMT -8
I luff it!!!! we were really bored...
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Post by rivenmist on Feb 6, 2008 16:34:10 GMT -8
lol, Love the hello poem Girr The title of this thread mskes me want to write this Make me smile, or make me cry Look at me laugh, hiding tears inside Masked with life, hiding my pain Never to see you return again...  Woww... |
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Woww...