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Post by Aura on Jan 18, 2008 19:03:44 GMT -8
Ooh.... I like the first one a lot. Especially as it goes along. It's got a really nice rhythm.
And the second one too. All your poems have such a great flow to them.
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Post by Phanomel on Jan 18, 2008 19:19:44 GMT -8
Thanks? I'm just sort of "Blah! They could be better." Typeness. *closes an eye and cocks head* Gack.
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Post by NiaZen on Jan 18, 2008 20:24:17 GMT -8
I love your poems so much! *snuggles them*
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Post by rivenmist on Jan 22, 2008 4:15:48 GMT -8
XF I like your poems. First time I wrote that I wrote "Cheesy poes"...wow...  |
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Post by Phanomel on Jan 25, 2008 14:56:33 GMT -8
Cheesy poes. Hey, Edgar Allan Poe! XD
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Post by Phanomel on Mar 7, 2008 20:04:28 GMT -8
We wait.
We live.
We love.
We give.
We take.
We hate.
We cry.
We die.
Painting the world black... Here's my first action. I'm not exactly sure where it came from, but it'll probably grow.
Aaaand, here we are already.
We wonder.
We wait.
We try.
We bait.
We think.
We brink.
We call.
We fall.
May get even longer... or you could consider these completely different things. All up to you. I don't care. *emo*
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Post by GIR on Mar 7, 2008 20:13:39 GMT -8
Don't go emo on us!!! Joo be positive!
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Post by Phanomel on Mar 7, 2008 20:20:10 GMT -8
... That was being positive. @_@
Compared to my actual thougths anyways.
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Post by verscilith on Mar 8, 2008 15:20:26 GMT -8
Oh.. I frogot to guess!
Well, Howl, for one. I believe that one given. And VUka? I mean, it kinda fits in with the story Vuka told Falen and Shadow, and all the other information I've gathered on Howl's backstory. If one is two, then.. that'd be it, right?
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Post by Phanomel on Mar 8, 2008 15:22:18 GMT -8
Uh.. Which one are you talking about? @_@ The last one or something before that?
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Post by NiaZen on Mar 10, 2008 15:31:00 GMT -8
*hugs phan* don't do nothing stupid! >x< and your poems are greeeeeeaaaaaaatttttt!!!!!!!!!TTwTT...*mutters something in spanish*
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Post by verscilith on Mar 10, 2008 16:04:34 GMT -8
The first one.. methinks..  The one I said I'd guess on on the first page.. |
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Post by rivenmist on Mar 11, 2008 16:18:08 GMT -8
When did Phan do something stupid?
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Post by Phanomel on Mar 12, 2008 18:03:03 GMT -8
... I've already done too many stupid things to count. Be more specific Nia, or it'll probably happen.
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Post by rivenmist on Mar 15, 2008 22:48:25 GMT -8
.....My Phan is not stupid. She's......smart....................like me! Yeah! ^w^
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The one I said I'd guess on on the first page..